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新手,求批評我的文章
素渣渣
#1
感覺現在都靠心情寫,亂寫一通。
為了回到以前的文筆,還請狠評。
感謝各位大大。
7 years ago
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月兔縭魑
#2
你好,請問是大召喚師需要評論嗎?
7 years ago
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Walker
應該就是那部了,月兔大您就上吧!
7 years ago
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月兔縭魑
@Walker, 謝謝回答,不過長篇會需要明白作者對於自己的文筆或是文字有什麼樣的要求,畢竟在不清楚後續作者有什麼期許的狀態下做編輯,難免會有跟作者期待不相符的地方。
你有短篇需要評論的話,我也很樂意給予指教。(笑
7 years ago
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Walker
@月兔縭魑, 果然是專業的,還考慮到這麼多,不過我沒有短篇啦,只有一篇長篇小說,雖然現在還沒破8萬字,您要是願意的話,那我也就不吝指教了。
7 years ago
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月兔縭魑
@Walker, 好的,我會先把目前內容瀏覽過一遍,單章內容會以編輯建議直接做編輯,後面會再找你討論你對於這篇的期待,另外對於排版、標點、分段等,我會做比較細節的修改,而用詞部分會給予建議,可以參考使用。
7 years ago
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月兔縭魑
@Walker, 另外也有看到你的創作挑戰,我覺得可以更好。
7 years ago
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Walker
@月兔縭魑, 我必須再說一次,果然是專業的,其實那創作挑戰我只花了30分鐘,只是隨便打打,我看完後也覺得可以更好。非常謝謝你抽空來看。
但你還是先看SUJAJA的吧,畢竟算起來是他先來求評的。
7 years ago
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素渣渣
#3
真是厲害啊!還請大大給點意見稍微指教一下,希望可以更好!
7 years ago
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月兔縭魑
@Su Jaja, 好的,會以編輯建議作評論。後續會再私訊做一些細節討論。
7 years ago
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素渣渣
@月兔縭魑, 感恩!
7 years ago
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為了回到以前的文筆,還請狠評。
感謝各位大大。
你有短篇需要評論的話,我也很樂意給予指教。(笑
但你還是先看SUJAJA的吧,畢竟算起來是他先來求評的。