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大家来分享小说
煞星人
#1
我是一个新手 刚接触小说 所以都写不长
我希望你们可以看我小说给我评分 我也给你们评分
7 years ago
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星歿
@猪的胃, 劇情方面大致沒問題,但要稍微描述一下子角色的樣貌,雖說前文有角色介紹,若能使讀者邊閱讀時腦子也邊構築出故事中的世界當然是最好的啦❤
還有,作為寫手也請善用全形標點「」,。之類的,文章整體的視覺會引響他人閱讀的舒適感。
7 years ago
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朱諾(Juno)
@猪的胃, 題材我喜歡,驅魔什麼的超級合我胃口!不過,我覺得第一章可以多一些鋪陳,方便讀者更快融入
加油喔!可以多寫一些,有點不夠看!
7 years ago
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斟墨客 。 迷
@星歿,
“ ” 是大陸的用法,其實是ok
不過我有一點要說,其實不用加-吧!
7 years ago
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星歿
@迷初晨/初晨迷離, 原來如此OAO頭一次知道呢~
7 years ago
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朱諾(Juno)
@星歿, 感覺小星不常看大陸的文?
7 years ago
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斟墨客 。 迷
@星歿, 偷偷告訴你,我之前也不知道XD
7 years ago
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星歿
@朱諾(Juno), 我的確不看XDDD網路小說也是在加入penana後才開始看的,比較習慣實體的書本www
7 years ago
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斟墨客 。 迷
@星歿, 實體書有溫度,我也喜歡ww
7 years ago
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朱諾(Juno)
@星歿, 我也最愛實體書了,總覺得實體書翻起來比較有fu
7 years ago
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星歿
@迷初晨/初晨迷離, 真的ˊˇˋ
7 years ago
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星歿
@朱諾(Juno), 我也那麼認為XDDD用手機的小螢幕看文章不舒服
7 years ago
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Wendy,Dani,Brian
@星歿, 實體書!!!!XDXDXD我家一堆,我也覺得盯小銀幕不好,所以通常喜歡買實體的哈哈哈哈
7 years ago
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
#2
實體書支持者是也!
7 years ago
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心棠
#3
我也是!哈哈哈~
7 years ago
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我希望你们可以看我小说给我评分 我也给你们评分
還有,作為寫手也請善用全形標點「」,。之類的,文章整體的視覺會引響他人閱讀的舒適感。
加油喔!可以多寫一些,有點不夠看!
“ ” 是大陸的用法,其實是ok
不過我有一點要說,其實不用加-吧!