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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
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早前收到別人對自己作品的評語。
有些點子單看是明白,但要做到這個效果有點困難。
應該如何從文字中顯示出戰鬥的鋪陳及情緒?
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墨
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其實我覺得可以參考其他小說(雖然這方法沒什麼用……),本人都是增加一大堆形容詞來描述戰鬥的華麗,或是用配角來襯托主角~
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9967
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患遲來的中二病(?)的我是直接把腦海中的景象投射出來lol
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不邪
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我覺得寫小說就像是當戰地記者,或者要當自己是戰地記者,腦海中想像畫面,身心代入畫面,然後用文字描述畫面中的人事和物!
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有些點子單看是明白,但要做到這個效果有點困難。
應該如何從文字中顯示出戰鬥的鋪陳及情緒?