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撞牆期
Chris Tsoi
#1
各位好。
不知道各位有沒有跟我一樣的情況,明明起筆時行文如流水,腦海裡連結局都想好了。
可是到了中段,整個故事的結構很難整理,特別是線越拉越多,就開始發現人物分工和關係很混亂。
不知道大家有沒有什麼想法,可以擺脫這樣的撞牆期?
7 years ago
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栗子
#2
我發生過。
《這是我們的回憶》就是個例子。本來沒打算要川澄襲擊男主的,但因寫到後面發現故事不能和初時寫的結局連接,所以就加了這部份。還有,初時沒想過男主也是組織裏面的前員工,我就想:為何男主一定要救女主?所以就在這裡作出小小的改動。
7 years ago
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栗子
#3
只要遊花園不遊出馬路就好。而且想好後一定要問自己:這樣合理嗎?
7 years ago
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櫻雪
#4
最近寫作寫得很慢 可能覺得自己寫得不好
7 years ago
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櫻雪
#5
我覺得寫一個列表和人物關係圖 先將架構弄清楚再寫下去
7 years ago
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anvis
#6
很常出現
7 years ago
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千晴
#7
我大綱寫得比較詳細,人物也較少,不太會覺得混亂,但寫得中段常覺得呈現出來的東西不如預期,也是有個很想放棄的階段,大概就是能力還不足以做到想要的吧?
7 years ago
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Chris Tsoi
#8
感謝各位的建議,開始處理已經出場但未解釋關係或背景的人物,和記住埋下了的線。
還請各位批評指教,謝謝。
7 years ago
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不知道各位有沒有跟我一樣的情況,明明起筆時行文如流水,腦海裡連結局都想好了。
可是到了中段,整個故事的結構很難整理,特別是線越拉越多,就開始發現人物分工和關係很混亂。
不知道大家有沒有什麼想法,可以擺脫這樣的撞牆期?
《這是我們的回憶》就是個例子。本來沒打算要川澄襲擊男主的,但因寫到後面發現故事不能和初時寫的結局連接,所以就加了這部份。還有,初時沒想過男主也是組織裏面的前員工,我就想:為何男主一定要救女主?所以就在這裡作出小小的改動。
還請各位批評指教,謝謝。