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筆法修煉
杜于
#1
請問大家要增強人物的形容,通常參照什麼樣的資料?
或是從什麼類型的書上去學習?
7 years ago
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鶖翎
我是沒看書,但是我會替我的角色設定很多的資料,讓我的角色是個從出生到現在有完善的經歷事件,這其實很方便我在下筆寫角色時不會卡住,而且角色有個既定的模型會比較有完整的感覺。
我作品區裡放的「已出版作品」是有一些我在設定角色跟故事時的發想過程,但是我還沒全部搬過來。
7 years ago
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杜于
@鶖翎, 哦哦!這個很多教學都會提到,把角色當作真人。
7 years ago
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鶖翎
@伊里斯, 不過我的想法是盡量不要把角色當自己寫XD因為當你加入太多自己在角色身上時,會無意間漏掉自己很多在寫作時該注意的劇情細節,因為可能都想說「我覺得就是會怎樣怎樣做」,我看過太多這樣的作品,細問之下常常某角色正是作者的自身投射。
你可以把角色當成一個剛認識的朋友,從剛認識到很熟對方所有事情那樣。
7 years ago
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杜于
@鶖翎, 這個部分我稍嫌弱勢一點,我也很容易帶入自己,要再磨練磨練。
7 years ago
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Wendy,Dani,Brian
@鶖翎, 我好像就有這種狀況qwq
7 years ago
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鶖翎
@伊里斯, 我因為一開始就不是投入自己在角色裡創作,所以我是後來看很多作品後才發現不少人都有這狀況存在。你可以當作寫一個朋友的觀察日記那樣,比較容易脫離自己。
7 years ago
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鶖翎
@Wendy (Dani Melson), 很多人都有,尤其是還沒創作很多作品的人更是如此,連老手都還是會有的XD
7 years ago
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杜于
@鶖翎, 好的,我會去嘗試的。
7 years ago
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Wendy,Dani,Brian
@鶖翎, 哈哈哈哈真的XD所以要訓練他是他,我是自己,並不相甘XDXDXDXD
或許會成功XD
7 years ago
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鶖翎
@伊里斯, 一起加油XD我也不斷在嘗試新的寫作模式中。
7 years ago
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杜于
@鶖翎, 加油!!!!!
7 years ago
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鶖翎
@Wendy (Dani Melson), 沒錯XD一起加油!
7 years ago
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糖凌
#2
伊里斯,這也是凌所欠缺的,借你的題目我也學習一下吧!不過凌有本小筆記,看書或文章有看到特別的形容詞或成語時我都會記下來,又更或者是整段寫很好也會抄下來,只是有點費時費工些,寫久了!自然形容的好,凌是這麼想的,提供你做小參考!^.^
7 years ago
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杜于
@詠凌, 哦哦!感謝您!真是後悔以前看書都太隨意啦~
7 years ago
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或是從什麼類型的書上去學習?
我作品區裡放的「已出版作品」是有一些我在設定角色跟故事時的發想過程,但是我還沒全部搬過來。
你可以把角色當成一個剛認識的朋友,從剛認識到很熟對方所有事情那樣。
或許會成功XD