This is my work too can you give comments or suggestion this

https://www.penana.com/story/82379

https://www.penana.com/story/72372/space-engineers-aurus-in-danger/

Hi everyone, I'm new here and I've currently self-published an original novel on Amazon (written since I was 14), could you check it out?

Novel name: Traveller

Link:

https://www.amazon.com/Traveller-Cinderella-C-Y-Yeung-ebook/dp/B08X2X3MPL

Here is the Google doc format:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rs0zCn_IOPDG1_QOnd_QKNDd8V7jITO4reO4lFIKBaw/edit?usp=drivesdk

I am new here and working on my first novel in the genre of dystopian fiction, I would love feedback https://www.penana.com/story/85172/union/

So i posted my first chapter...give it a look over if you got the time ❤❤

Hi there, I am new here and I am one of those people who have loads of ideas but are not always the best at putting them to page. I would love any help with my grammar, I only have four short parts up at the moment and would really appreciate any help correcting my mistakes <3
https://www.penana.com/story/88730/not-your-mate/

Where my hopeless romantics at?! Seriously romance is dead.

The Girl Who Loved Two Princes
https://www.penana.com/story/91888/the-girl-who-loved-two-princes

My romance novels surround royals. They are like nothing you have ever read, boasting a dual timeline that takes the reader through the roller-coaster of back and forth. Love it or hate it, I want to know. Check out my first book The Girl Who Loved Two Princes. I have completed two in the series and am about to finish the third, so if this is for you, there's plenty to dive into.

Hello! I'm new here, but I've been writing stories for 3 years now. I love to write different types of stories (mainly romance, horror, fantasy, mystery and of course they are all fiction) but the one I need proofreading is a romance, mystery and fantasy one. Let me know if you are interested!

Here's the link of the story: penana.com/article/732206