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Morgan LionHeart
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I'm wondering if anyone would be willing to look over chapter one of Volume 1 of my light novel series "Clandestine" Volume 1 is called "Loyalty"
Clandestine Volume 1: Loyalty - Penana
https://www.penana.com/story/27354/clandestine-volume-1-loyalty/issue/0
6 years ago
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Lunassandra Hughes
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Yours sounds really interesting. I'll gladly critique if you critique one of mine! As long as their similar in length I'll gladly help you out with it! :)
6 years ago
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Clandestine Volume 1: Loyalty - Penana
https://www.penana.com/story/27354/clandestine-volume-1-loyalty/issue/0