Hi guys. If you have time to spare please don't read this story. It's awful. You certainly don't want to spent your time on this. Please don't click the link bellow. Thanks :)
If you find the time, I'm looking for someone to look over "A Quilan Called Brisance". It's a long one, so even a skim would be helpful. It's a love story set in an alternate steampunk timeline.
https://www.penana.com/story/20573/butterfly-stories-a-color-called-coward/toc
http://www.penana.com/story/22811/anathem