The story is written in the form of a Journal. Its a quick read about actual events, a tug of war between the light and the dark. What happens when you visit the scariest places on Earth. Well, something follows you home. That's what.

I will give a constructive critique for your short story. Any type of writing is OK with me. I am an experienced, publish author and know a thing or two about writing.

Call me J.

Hey J I'd like to repay your help! I'll be happy to read and discuss your work :)