I read the first part of your story
so far I understood that you got awesome explanation skills
you kept every sentence interesting
but I sometimes can't understand who is talking
IDK if it's your way of writing if so, I'm sorry
and good luck writing more.
Hey there, I have a upcoming chapter of a book I’m writing in the works. I would say what it is, but I’m keeping it secret to my fans; the only people who know are the people who are collaborators or beta-readers. If you’re interested in reading it and giving your feedback, I’ll drop you the link and a description of what is about in a message box. To sum it up in a way to keep it from spoiling the surprise, it is a science fiction genre book based in a dystopian future. It is intended to be a published series.
Hi, I'm always looking for feedbacks. I publish an homemade translation of my work (I'm italian) and I'm always concerned about the quality of it. If you want to check it out, I'd be pleased of it.
然後按「加至主畫面」
I'm not a good writer but a human of course
give me your work and let me read
if you can
also, check out my work
https://www.penana.com/story/93610/caedis/
so far I understood that you got awesome explanation skills
you kept every sentence interesting
but I sometimes can't understand who is talking
IDK if it's your way of writing if so, I'm sorry
and good luck writing more.