I'm in-between stories and looking to help someone with theirs.

Id love to get some suggestions and basic help on any mistakes on any of my works if you'd like :P

The Girl Who Loved Two Princes
https://www.penana.com/story/91888/the-girl-who-loved-two-princes

I'd like to invite you to take a look at my book. Hope you enjoy it

I actually am working on 2 books, but for now this is the book that I published so far:

https://www.penana.com/article/732206

enjoy!

Hi! my name's Mottotte Shinji, one author of the Authors of Betsu no Sekai ni Mezameru. Have a look at "Betsu no Sekai ni Mezameru" a Fantasy/Adventure story about a man who had been transferred into a new world hoping to have a second chance in life to spend with his family.

I created 4 new creatures similar to Lycans, 2 of which already appeared.
Reviews would be greatly appreciated!
penana.com/story/97064/betsu-no-sekai-ni-mezameru/

fun fact: The name Mottotte Shinji was inspired by Yorushika's "Itte" > "mada **Shinji**rarenai kedo, **Motto**, chanto I**tte**" meaning: Believe and Say it more.

https://www.penana.com/story/91384/infinity-magic/

Let me know what you think in the comment. It will be helpful for me cause I'm in the middle of doing second revising of this one :-)

If proof reading means reviewing
Then i would need your help

Read my story and help me fix the the errors or help me with things i can improve

https://www.penana.com/story/100007/dawn/

Thank you.