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求狠評
影月良憶
#1
我係新手作家
希望各位大大可以指教一下我
講下對我寫嘅小說<<喪屍時代>>嘅睇法同指點小妹一二
例如我考慮緊應唔應該改用第三人稱嘅寫法
無論各方面((如內容,文筆)都絕對唔介意狠評
我好希望可以改善自己
拜託
5 years ago
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藍傑沙
#2
大家互相交流,唔會狠評,只會建議
5 years ago
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影月良憶
@藍傑沙, 沒有沒有,我不是這個意思,我只是怕大家建議我的時候怕傷到我自尊而不直接說出我的問題所在。謝謝XD
5 years ago
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藍傑沙
@影月良憶, 其實寫作是很主觀的事情,如果建議我想也會溫和一些,畢竟寫作是毅力的表現應該給予支持
5 years ago
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影月良憶
@藍傑沙, 不過文筆和內容的話,應該會有較客觀準則,但我自己評價自己的文章,總是較難客觀呢>_<
5 years ago
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希望各位大大可以指教一下我
講下對我寫嘅小說<<喪屍時代>>嘅睇法同指點小妹一二
例如我考慮緊應唔應該改用第三人稱嘅寫法
無論各方面((如內容,文筆)都絕對唔介意狠評
我好希望可以改善自己
拜託