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自己的新嘗試
守行
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今日小弟會在自己的「隨心所寫」有更新,是第一次用這種寫作手法,故事會分上,中,下三篇,今次會推上和中,希望各位俾面給點點意見!謝!
7 years ago
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
@守行,
如果加上日期時間,會否令人更加清晰?
7 years ago
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
@守行,
我自己也試過將一對男女平行時空下來寫,感覺很好玩。
看你的中篇時,感覺有一種補完的感覺,卻沒有了自己的獨立性,如果最後三篇都可以有相等的觀賞價值便很精彩。
7 years ago
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守行
@十三郎寫作團隊, 感覺寫得太實在就像記錄事情一樣!模糊一點,想像空間大一點。
以後幾天我就會寫你給的挑戰,希望能趕得及😁
7 years ago
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
@守行, 哈哈!先謝了!
7 years ago
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守行
@十三郎寫作團隊, 所以先推上和中,看看大家意見,再寫妹妹的故事,這次主要想寫得簡短,寫得太清晰,反而沒有了想像空間。
7 years ago
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
@守行,
哦。因為要平衡簡短同感情到唔到位,有點難去處理。
我諗可以試下落多少少第一身的感覺反應黎吸引讀者,令讀者可以投入之餘,又可以強化角色的特性,又不會影響故事的空間。
7 years ago
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守行
@十三郎寫作團隊, 胸中墨水不夠用,字到用時方恨少😧有些感受以目前的我,確實找不到適當的文字來形容😢
7 years ago
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
@守行,
呢個感覺⋯⋯我好明白!!!
7 years ago
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守行
@十三郎寫作團隊, 所以每次寫作都要看看一些名作者的作品,轉承接合,怎樣用文字打動人,可惜怎樣看,到自己寫時,就發覺腦退化症又發作了😂
7 years ago
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
@守行,
如果想用呢種方式黎記事,建議可以看看陳慧的《拾香紀》。
佢用宇好簡潔,可以參考。
7 years ago
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守行
@十三郎寫作團隊, 👌,謝!
7 years ago
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如果加上日期時間,會否令人更加清晰?
我自己也試過將一對男女平行時空下來寫,感覺很好玩。
看你的中篇時,感覺有一種補完的感覺,卻沒有了自己的獨立性,如果最後三篇都可以有相等的觀賞價值便很精彩。
以後幾天我就會寫你給的挑戰,希望能趕得及😁
哦。因為要平衡簡短同感情到唔到位,有點難去處理。
我諗可以試下落多少少第一身的感覺反應黎吸引讀者,令讀者可以投入之餘,又可以強化角色的特性,又不會影響故事的空間。
呢個感覺⋯⋯我好明白!!!
如果想用呢種方式黎記事,建議可以看看陳慧的《拾香紀》。
佢用宇好簡潔,可以參考。