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求評 (2000 P幣酬)、求互評 (已截止)
小眼睛
#1
多謝咁多位嘅幫忙!
得到好多好有用嘅意見,可以同唔同嘅人傾偈交流真係好開心^^
不過由於有興趣互評嘅人太多,我欠落周身數、寫唔切回評,所以需要暫時截止啦……
—————
哈囉大家好,我係小眼睛^^
我係8月加入Penana嘅,可能畢竟係寫R18, 故仔係有人開嚟睇嘅,但真心一滴交流都冇。
最初覺得可能因為喺H文留言好尷尬,所以冇人會浦出嚟俾意見,但係去其他H文睇睇,人地啲comment熱鬧過街市,咁自己嗰喥水靜鵝飛,好明顯係故仔出問題啦。
寫故事最開心嘅地方,都係同人交流求進啫。但係冇留言就冇批評,連要改善啲咩都唔知,真係好迷惘好灰心……
大家可能忙寫文、忙學業、忙工作,我明,所以如果有人願意幫忙嘅,我會以2000 P幣報答!或者如果有作家都想要書評嘅,我亦好樂意一評換一評 (大家齊齊進步 >u<) 希望少少incentive可以吸引到你啦!
我亦都明喺H文留言係真心老尷嘅,所以如果有興趣嘅話,私訊就OK啦!就算故仔爛到睇唔完,都希望你可以話我知有咩不足。
P幣酬評注意:
- 小女子清貧,酬謝幾篇書評可能就乾塘,請先DM確定我未收單再開始寫書評
- 希望可以講明幾時完成書評 (耐都唔緊要,只係無限等待實在太痛苦)
- 畢章都係真金白銀換返嚟嘅,書評請符合以下幾點:
(1) 請評論劣作:penana.com/story/87187/水星墜落時
(2)至少500字
(3) 須包括文筆、人設及劇情的評論,當然亦歡迎其他範疇嘅意見啦
(4) 我係求進步嘅,唔會玻璃心 (啩?笑),理性批評無任歡迎,但係唔接受冇建設性嘅批評、攻擊或侮辱。
如未能符合要求,將不獲發酬金 (乜我咁煩膠lol)。
互評注意:
- 請DM註明求互評,如果唔係我會誤會有善長人翁無條件打救哈哈
- 中意評邊個故事都得,甚至係創挑嘅短篇都OK!(有兩篇已完)
penana.com/user/106865/小眼睛
- 我嘅書評會盡量用++--形式,最少兩正評、最多兩負評,如果真係好中意你嘅作品,可能冇負評都唔定哈哈!如果你想要多啲負評,可以再深入討論
- 性格使然,負評分析或會較正評為詳盡
- 如果想我將正評貼上作品留回區,話我知就得
- 我唔係專業評書人,只會將我嘅觀感寫出嚟,加上我口水多過茶,請多多包涵我嘅廢話
- 我唔會攻擊或侮辱作品,但係認真講嘢直白,如果其實淨係想聽正評又或者係玻璃心嘅,就唔好搵我啦!
***最後提醒各位,我嘅小說全部18禁,年滿18歲先可以睇架***
2 years ago
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晴晴小扥爾
我想幫助,但我得11歲
2 years ago
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小眼睛
@晴晴小扥爾,
hello! 多謝你咁有心幫我^^
但係我啲故仔真係唔適合18歲以下閱讀。
或者有興趣嘅話,可以幫下我眼睇創挑?
https://www.penana.com/story/79204/%E8%95%89%E5%9C%92%E7%94%9F%E6%97%A5%E6%9C%83-2021-%E5%B9%B4-10-%E6%9C%88/issue/33
你需唔需要互評?不過要等頗耐下,我前面仲有幾個故仔要評,而我手腳極慢……
2 years ago
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Hasret
#2
我係一隻身處永久凍土層嘅邊緣人,想求互評QQP幣多少與否隨緣啦,我只係想有人可以睇同討論我嘅作品😢😢😢😢
2 years ago
Reply
小眼睛
Hello Hasret, 我會去睇你嘅作品架!不過評論會慢啲……積咗好多本書都仲未評 TT ^ TT
開post求評有好多熱心人會認真回應,你都可以試下呀^^
2 years ago
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得到好多好有用嘅意見,可以同唔同嘅人傾偈交流真係好開心^^
不過由於有興趣互評嘅人太多,我欠落周身數、寫唔切回評,所以需要暫時截止啦……
—————
哈囉大家好,我係小眼睛^^
我係8月加入Penana嘅,可能畢竟係寫R18, 故仔係有人開嚟睇嘅,但真心一滴交流都冇。
最初覺得可能因為喺H文留言好尷尬,所以冇人會浦出嚟俾意見,但係去其他H文睇睇,人地啲comment熱鬧過街市,咁自己嗰喥水靜鵝飛,好明顯係故仔出問題啦。
寫故事最開心嘅地方,都係同人交流求進啫。但係冇留言就冇批評,連要改善啲咩都唔知,真係好迷惘好灰心……
大家可能忙寫文、忙學業、忙工作,我明,所以如果有人願意幫忙嘅,我會以2000 P幣報答!或者如果有作家都想要書評嘅,我亦好樂意一評換一評 (大家齊齊進步 >u<) 希望少少incentive可以吸引到你啦!
我亦都明喺H文留言係真心老尷嘅,所以如果有興趣嘅話,私訊就OK啦!就算故仔爛到睇唔完,都希望你可以話我知有咩不足。
P幣酬評注意:
- 小女子清貧,酬謝幾篇書評可能就乾塘,請先DM確定我未收單再開始寫書評
- 希望可以講明幾時完成書評 (耐都唔緊要,只係無限等待實在太痛苦)
- 畢章都係真金白銀換返嚟嘅,書評請符合以下幾點:
(1) 請評論劣作:penana.com/story/87187/水星墜落時
(2)至少500字
(3) 須包括文筆、人設及劇情的評論,當然亦歡迎其他範疇嘅意見啦
(4) 我係求進步嘅,唔會玻璃心 (啩?笑),理性批評無任歡迎,但係唔接受冇建設性嘅批評、攻擊或侮辱。
如未能符合要求,將不獲發酬金 (乜我咁煩膠lol)。
互評注意:
- 請DM註明求互評,如果唔係我會誤會有善長人翁無條件打救哈哈
- 中意評邊個故事都得,甚至係創挑嘅短篇都OK!(有兩篇已完)
penana.com/user/106865/小眼睛
- 我嘅書評會盡量用++--形式,最少兩正評、最多兩負評,如果真係好中意你嘅作品,可能冇負評都唔定哈哈!如果你想要多啲負評,可以再深入討論
- 性格使然,負評分析或會較正評為詳盡
- 如果想我將正評貼上作品留回區,話我知就得
- 我唔係專業評書人,只會將我嘅觀感寫出嚟,加上我口水多過茶,請多多包涵我嘅廢話
- 我唔會攻擊或侮辱作品,但係認真講嘢直白,如果其實淨係想聽正評又或者係玻璃心嘅,就唔好搵我啦!
***最後提醒各位,我嘅小說全部18禁,年滿18歲先可以睇架***
hello! 多謝你咁有心幫我^^
但係我啲故仔真係唔適合18歲以下閱讀。
或者有興趣嘅話,可以幫下我眼睇創挑?
https://www.penana.com/story/79204/%E8%95%89%E5%9C%92%E7%94%9F%E6%97%A5%E6%9C%83-2021-%E5%B9%B4-10-%E6%9C%88/issue/33
你需唔需要互評?不過要等頗耐下,我前面仲有幾個故仔要評,而我手腳極慢……
開post求評有好多熱心人會認真回應,你都可以試下呀^^