I'm writing a gxg college romance. I had a burst of motivation today and basically wrote an outline for the whole story and wanted some opinions. If some of you could provide some title ideas or suggestions for the plot itself, it would be appreciated!
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1 - val’s pov
Intro to valentin harper
She has a boyfriend named ??? who wants to bring her along to a house party but shes not even that into her bf anymore and finds him boring
Jams to the edgy punk kids’ music the whole time
2 - june’s pov
Playing at the house party
Kinda hates the popular kids because shes one of those anti-popular kids who want nothing but to burn the normies
3 - val’s pov
Sees the punk band kids again and lowkey finds june really interesting
Tries to approach with her usual charm and charisma but june is having none of it
4 - june
Dislikes the popular kids because she thinks theyre all shallow and gross
Rejects val’s offer to hang out after practice
Heads to practice and finds val there, demanding to listen
5 - val
Val’s unusually nervous but excited to see them play
Actually inspired
June talks to her and she says that shes actually really into this music
She does some playful flirting despite having a boyfriend
A lot of flirting.
6 - june
She thinks that val is just flirting for the thrill and finds val decent
Asks her if shed be interested in watching their rehearsals every after school
Val actually comes w her bf after school but decides to watch anyway
June still has a little inkling that she just wants some thrill
Thinks that val is hitting on her but just because shes one of the bad kids and its fun for val to try and pull her so she tries to ignore it
7 - val
Hangs out with june a lot
Thinks about her and her bf
Fights w bf !!
Yeah i think i fell for the emo
8 - june
Am i catching feelings for val?!?!?!?!?
Lowkey loves hanging out with her
Hates everything about val’s bf
“Bro i should be her lover >:(“
Pretty sure val’s straight tho
Gay issues
9 - val
Slowly stops hanging out w her boyfriend and a lot of canceled hangouts
Lowkey obsessed w june
Falls HARD
Friends are pissed w her for being distant but thats because she loves going with june.
To make up for it, she goes with her friends to a party
June is mad at her for canceling
Finds her boyfriend cheating on her and wishes she was with june instead
Gets drunk and friends drive her home, trying to comfort her
She vents to june
10 - june
Further makes her hate the bf
Feels bad and drives over
If she were her lover, val would never get hurt
She would be so much better
Cuddles val until she stops crying, fast asleep
Wishes she had a chance
Offers to go out with her the next day, just the two of them. Yk, to help her feel better. As friends.
11 - val
Agrees, but wishes it was as a date
Fantasizes about being with june
Flirts like hell because thats who she is. There is no meaning.
Goes home kinda sad
Remembers that june has a gig today at a small bar
Attends
June is super happy to see her
Breathless after watching their performance
Pulls her backstage as the performance ends, pouring out her feelings. She doesnt know how to handle her feelings. Shes straight. But shes never been happier than when she was with june.
10 - june
They melt into each other, sharing one beautiful kiss
What about your boyfriend?
Val says she'll break up with him
June cant believe it
Her friends all hype her up
They go home together
Jams to the the song the whole drive home
11 - val
Wakes up in june’s bed
Pretty nervous because it was her first time with a girl
They have a heartfelt convo on feelings for each other
She really struggles with her sexuality
June reassures her and they share such a pure kiss that val forgets what she was even scared of in the first place
They agree to keep it lowkey at val’s request
12 - june
Val just does it and breaks up with bf
They’re happy together fr
Group hangouts w val’s friends and her friends
They all sleep over at val’s place
Val and june fall asleep cuddled together
13 - val
At school, a friend of val’s is hosting a party before spring break at the end of march
Shes quite excited because she already knows who to ask
A bunch of guys ask to be her partner since they know she just broke up with bf
She lies and says that shes not going with anyone
Leaves under the guise of finishing the due projects
Immediately goes to june’s place
They plan it out and are super pumped
June’s band is performing, and they hang out after practice, sharing another kiss
14 - june
When val goes home, she tells her dad that she’ll be going with a girlypop to a spring party thing
Her dad is all supportive since she’s been openly lesbian since middle school
Excited to meet val and offers to drive them
June jokes about how shes not a child anymore but agrees because dad daughter moments
Goes to dance all gorgeous
Picks up val looking even more stunning
A couple drinking games
June is told to kiss the prettiest girl in the room or take a shot and lose
She takes a shot, but walks up to val and kisses her, the taste of the tequila still on her lips
Still loses HAHAHA
13 - val
Last day before spring break and june hangs out at val’s place after school
She’s rich, but she isn't happy
Her parents are actually split
Says that she wants to hang out this one time before she goes to stay with her father over break
June says that she understands and all that stuff
They have a heartfelt convo on parents
14 - june
Spring break without val
Constantly texts her
She and friends have a good time though
Wonders how val is doing the whole time
Constant updates on how shes doing and where she is but val hardly replies
Believes in her anyway
15 - val
Back to school and she apologises
June is stressed and asks if it was family things
Bf is spreading rumors about her and how shes such a slut that she goes down on girls too
Val is unstable as shit andshes not ready for everyone to know yet
Asks june if she really is that much of a slag
June reassures her
June backs her up the next time people keep asking questions and reveals that they are dating, and theres no problem with that
16 - june
Val says that they arent together
Val suddenly stops talking to her in public
Shes stressed and doesnt know what to do because she really loves val but hates that shes just being ignored
Feels lied to and as if val’s just throwing everything away
Her friends comfort her and says that she was too good for a normie anyway
“But she’s not just a normie. She’s the most special girl I’ve met. I love her.”
Val blows up her phone but june isnt replying
Breaks up with val
Cries herself to sleep
17 - val
So hurt that june broke up with her
June was the only girl she’d ever truly loved and made her feel loved
She feels so guilty but manages
Shows up to practice like she always does
June isnt talking to her
Shes really bummed
Appears at june’s door
Tries to apologise
June’s friends are pissed at her
June isnt, and makes them let her in
18 - june
She demands an explanation as soon as they go upstairs and val admits that shes scared of telling everyone
June feels as if shes embarrassed of her, and that doesnt do wonders to her confidence.
Val tries to reassure her
June argues, telling her that she didnt keep in contact over spring break and stopped talking to her in public, then just show up and think that she was willing to bend over backwards for val
Val apologises, explains that she was really stressed over spring break and that she just had a lot of problems with family and that her family was constantly asking why she didnt have a guy over when she had a steady boyfriend for a year now and shes just scared of telling everyone
Calls her a coward but accepts the apologies
19 - val
June convinces her to pull herself together and have enough courage to tell them
Brings june to her place again, but this time, her parents are there
She comes out to her parents
Her parents are confused and stuff
She doesnt like boys and never will
Her dad is all skeptical, saying that shes too young
June argues that their daughter is an adult, and has the right to choose who she loves
Dad is still skeptical and doesnt support, but he respects his daughter’s choice
Mom is super supportive and loves june
20 - june
One final show
Theyre doing the rehearsal and val was late to watch
June was a little disappointed but val eventually arrived
Val says the exact sentence she said when they first met at rehearsal, demanding to listen to the cover of the same song they covered when they first talked
At the show, val sings with them
At the end of the show, val pulls her close and kisses her in front of everybody
“Whos a coward?”
That is amazing! I would love to read it, but maybe include a final epilogue chapter to tie everything (if there is anything) together and give an awesome goodbye? Unless it's a series, in which case continue in the next book.
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1 - val’s pov
Intro to valentin harper
She has a boyfriend named ??? who wants to bring her along to a house party but shes not even that into her bf anymore and finds him boring
Jams to the edgy punk kids’ music the whole time
2 - june’s pov
Playing at the house party
Kinda hates the popular kids because shes one of those anti-popular kids who want nothing but to burn the normies
3 - val’s pov
Sees the punk band kids again and lowkey finds june really interesting
Tries to approach with her usual charm and charisma but june is having none of it
4 - june
Dislikes the popular kids because she thinks theyre all shallow and gross
Rejects val’s offer to hang out after practice
Heads to practice and finds val there, demanding to listen
5 - val
Val’s unusually nervous but excited to see them play
Actually inspired
June talks to her and she says that shes actually really into this music
She does some playful flirting despite having a boyfriend
A lot of flirting.
6 - june
She thinks that val is just flirting for the thrill and finds val decent
Asks her if shed be interested in watching their rehearsals every after school
Val actually comes w her bf after school but decides to watch anyway
June still has a little inkling that she just wants some thrill
Thinks that val is hitting on her but just because shes one of the bad kids and its fun for val to try and pull her so she tries to ignore it
7 - val
Hangs out with june a lot
Thinks about her and her bf
Fights w bf !!
Yeah i think i fell for the emo
8 - june
Am i catching feelings for val?!?!?!?!?
Lowkey loves hanging out with her
Hates everything about val’s bf
“Bro i should be her lover >:(“
Pretty sure val’s straight tho
Gay issues
9 - val
Slowly stops hanging out w her boyfriend and a lot of canceled hangouts
Lowkey obsessed w june
Falls HARD
Friends are pissed w her for being distant but thats because she loves going with june.
To make up for it, she goes with her friends to a party
June is mad at her for canceling
Finds her boyfriend cheating on her and wishes she was with june instead
Gets drunk and friends drive her home, trying to comfort her
She vents to june
10 - june
Further makes her hate the bf
Feels bad and drives over
If she were her lover, val would never get hurt
She would be so much better
Cuddles val until she stops crying, fast asleep
Wishes she had a chance
Offers to go out with her the next day, just the two of them. Yk, to help her feel better. As friends.
11 - val
Agrees, but wishes it was as a date
Fantasizes about being with june
Flirts like hell because thats who she is. There is no meaning.
Goes home kinda sad
Remembers that june has a gig today at a small bar
Attends
June is super happy to see her
Breathless after watching their performance
Pulls her backstage as the performance ends, pouring out her feelings. She doesnt know how to handle her feelings. Shes straight. But shes never been happier than when she was with june.
10 - june
They melt into each other, sharing one beautiful kiss
What about your boyfriend?
Val says she'll break up with him
June cant believe it
Her friends all hype her up
They go home together
Jams to the the song the whole drive home
11 - val
Wakes up in june’s bed
Pretty nervous because it was her first time with a girl
They have a heartfelt convo on feelings for each other
She really struggles with her sexuality
June reassures her and they share such a pure kiss that val forgets what she was even scared of in the first place
They agree to keep it lowkey at val’s request
12 - june
Val just does it and breaks up with bf
They’re happy together fr
Group hangouts w val’s friends and her friends
They all sleep over at val’s place
Val and june fall asleep cuddled together
13 - val
At school, a friend of val’s is hosting a party before spring break at the end of march
Shes quite excited because she already knows who to ask
A bunch of guys ask to be her partner since they know she just broke up with bf
She lies and says that shes not going with anyone
Leaves under the guise of finishing the due projects
Immediately goes to june’s place
They plan it out and are super pumped
June’s band is performing, and they hang out after practice, sharing another kiss
14 - june
When val goes home, she tells her dad that she’ll be going with a girlypop to a spring party thing
Her dad is all supportive since she’s been openly lesbian since middle school
Excited to meet val and offers to drive them
June jokes about how shes not a child anymore but agrees because dad daughter moments
Goes to dance all gorgeous
Picks up val looking even more stunning
A couple drinking games
June is told to kiss the prettiest girl in the room or take a shot and lose
She takes a shot, but walks up to val and kisses her, the taste of the tequila still on her lips
Still loses HAHAHA
13 - val
Last day before spring break and june hangs out at val’s place after school
She’s rich, but she isn't happy
Her parents are actually split
Says that she wants to hang out this one time before she goes to stay with her father over break
June says that she understands and all that stuff
They have a heartfelt convo on parents
14 - june
Spring break without val
Constantly texts her
She and friends have a good time though
Wonders how val is doing the whole time
Constant updates on how shes doing and where she is but val hardly replies
Believes in her anyway
15 - val
Back to school and she apologises
June is stressed and asks if it was family things
Bf is spreading rumors about her and how shes such a slut that she goes down on girls too
Val is unstable as shit andshes not ready for everyone to know yet
Asks june if she really is that much of a slag
June reassures her
June backs her up the next time people keep asking questions and reveals that they are dating, and theres no problem with that
16 - june
Val says that they arent together
Val suddenly stops talking to her in public
Shes stressed and doesnt know what to do because she really loves val but hates that shes just being ignored
Feels lied to and as if val’s just throwing everything away
Her friends comfort her and says that she was too good for a normie anyway
“But she’s not just a normie. She’s the most special girl I’ve met. I love her.”
Val blows up her phone but june isnt replying
Breaks up with val
Cries herself to sleep
17 - val
So hurt that june broke up with her
June was the only girl she’d ever truly loved and made her feel loved
She feels so guilty but manages
Shows up to practice like she always does
June isnt talking to her
Shes really bummed
Appears at june’s door
Tries to apologise
June’s friends are pissed at her
June isnt, and makes them let her in
18 - june
She demands an explanation as soon as they go upstairs and val admits that shes scared of telling everyone
June feels as if shes embarrassed of her, and that doesnt do wonders to her confidence.
Val tries to reassure her
June argues, telling her that she didnt keep in contact over spring break and stopped talking to her in public, then just show up and think that she was willing to bend over backwards for val
Val apologises, explains that she was really stressed over spring break and that she just had a lot of problems with family and that her family was constantly asking why she didnt have a guy over when she had a steady boyfriend for a year now and shes just scared of telling everyone
Calls her a coward but accepts the apologies
19 - val
June convinces her to pull herself together and have enough courage to tell them
Brings june to her place again, but this time, her parents are there
She comes out to her parents
Her parents are confused and stuff
She doesnt like boys and never will
Her dad is all skeptical, saying that shes too young
June argues that their daughter is an adult, and has the right to choose who she loves
Dad is still skeptical and doesnt support, but he respects his daughter’s choice
Mom is super supportive and loves june
20 - june
One final show
Theyre doing the rehearsal and val was late to watch
June was a little disappointed but val eventually arrived
Val says the exact sentence she said when they first met at rehearsal, demanding to listen to the cover of the same song they covered when they first talked
At the show, val sings with them
At the end of the show, val pulls her close and kisses her in front of everybody
“Whos a coward?”
That is amazing! I would love to read it, but maybe include a final epilogue chapter to tie everything (if there is anything) together and give an awesome goodbye? Unless it's a series, in which case continue in the next book.