Hello guys!

If someone has the time, could you look over my story "On Wings of a Dragon" and grade it for me? Here's some info on it:

Status: In Progress
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Fantasy
Summary: When Renee Enceladus, leader of the Northern DragonRiders Guild mysteriously disappears, her brother, Alexander is left with questions that demand answers. As time passes Alex decides to go and search for his sister and embarks on a journey that will bring him face to face with his greatest fears and doubts, ultimately changing him and his loved ones in ways he couldn't imagine.

https://www.penana.com/story/1920/on-wings-of-a-dragon/toc

Thanks in advance.

I will see to it; although, it might not be right away. It definitely sounds like a good story.
Thanks!

Signed,
Pencil Melody, Principal