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【求評】《獻身者》
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連結: https://www.penana.com/article/482275
簡介:
類型:科幻戰鬥番
(假面騎士?)
簡介
一名少年在一個混亂的示威現場中發現自己疑似穿越到未來的中國;在自稱「永帝」的領導者統治之下,已改朝換代的中國創造出不受外部勢力干預、只屬於國民的世外桃源;這個新世界不再有人與人之間的階級觀念,更沒有社會撕裂,民風淳樸,國泰民安......亦然,卻有一名叛國的科學家將少年改造成名為【獻身者】的改造人戰士,要求他推翻「永帝」並破壞這烏托邦......
作者:傀儡演員
剛更新完故事第二篇的所有內容,在修文及準備第三篇期間希望能有些建議/評語作參考。由於之前已獲得過第一篇的評語,這次希望能覆蓋第二篇的正文及番外(但不強求)。
可長可短,並沒硬性規定要聚焦在哪方面,評者可盡情Freestyle~
1 year ago
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簡介:
類型:科幻戰鬥番
(假面騎士?)
簡介
一名少年在一個混亂的示威現場中發現自己疑似穿越到未來的中國;在自稱「永帝」的領導者統治之下,已改朝換代的中國創造出不受外部勢力干預、只屬於國民的世外桃源;這個新世界不再有人與人之間的階級觀念,更沒有社會撕裂,民風淳樸,國泰民安......亦然,卻有一名叛國的科學家將少年改造成名為【獻身者】的改造人戰士,要求他推翻「永帝」並破壞這烏托邦......
作者:傀儡演員
剛更新完故事第二篇的所有內容,在修文及準備第三篇期間希望能有些建議/評語作參考。由於之前已獲得過第一篇的評語,這次希望能覆蓋第二篇的正文及番外(但不強求)。
可長可短,並沒硬性規定要聚焦在哪方面,評者可盡情Freestyle~