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【求評】《我想將青春退貨》
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連結:https://www.penana.com/story/101055
目前更新的還不是很多,但可能會以憶述或者像是散文的方式寫,不過還是想要得到讀者回饋。
求評範圍:全部(因為實在內容還不算多
想問以下問題:
1.會感覺使用過多隱喻或者文筆太花巧,導致閱讀方面有困難嗎?
2.會太過沉悶,以致提不起興趣嗎?
謝謝來評文的大家。
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目前更新的還不是很多,但可能會以憶述或者像是散文的方式寫,不過還是想要得到讀者回饋。
求評範圍:全部(因為實在內容還不算多
想問以下問題:
1.會感覺使用過多隱喻或者文筆太花巧,導致閱讀方面有困難嗎?
2.會太過沉悶,以致提不起興趣嗎?
謝謝來評文的大家。