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愚者
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可以看看我的小說嗎?是奇幻小說
作品名稱:風聞異錄
作品連結:penana.com/story/50555/風聞異錄
文風:輕鬆、微搞笑
類型:奇幻
請簡單的介紹作品:一個少年莫名其妙去到了幻世,有很多伏筆,介紹請參見原文簡介,小的太懶了
希望被評論的方向:劇情、文筆、角色設定、其他隨意
提交作品目前的字數:一萬+
作品狀態:連載中
預計字數(已完結不填):目前是開篇,預期會有很多字,因為是長篇
可擔負的回饋:300+ 左右
4 years ago
朱諾(Juno)
@愚者, 您好,這裡是朱諾。剛剛看了一下作者的作品,發覺文風偏輕小說。這塊我比較不擅長,最多給給寫作方面的意見。此外,作者已經投了十三郎了,是否考慮不要一稿多投,我擔心我跟十三郎的意見分歧令作者混亂。
4 years ago
愚者
@朱諾(Juno), 如果是這樣的話,可以把你的讀後感告訴我嗎?我想知道讀者的看法。謝謝你了!
4 years ago
朱諾(Juno)
@愚者, 那我還是接單了。至於作者說的回饋是指心得嗎?
4 years ago
愚者
@朱諾(Juno), 是的,先謝謝了
4 years ago
朱諾(Juno)
@愚者, 已經寫好了,在回評區
btw心得的話是我的置頂 小心,玫瑰有刺
4 years ago
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作品名稱:風聞異錄
作品連結:penana.com/story/50555/風聞異錄
文風:輕鬆、微搞笑
類型:奇幻
請簡單的介紹作品:一個少年莫名其妙去到了幻世,有很多伏筆,介紹請參見原文簡介,小的太懶了
希望被評論的方向:劇情、文筆、角色設定、其他隨意
提交作品目前的字數:一萬+
作品狀態:連載中
預計字數(已完結不填):目前是開篇,預期會有很多字,因為是長篇
可擔負的回饋:300+ 左右
btw心得的話是我的置頂 小心,玫瑰有刺