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新手第一次寫小說求大大指導~
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嗨嗨,天玥你好~
剛剛拜讀完您的小說,發現有許多缺漏
1.小說名稱意義都差不多,無法給人新鮮感
2.有些故事內容沒有齊全,像有開頭但結局模糊
3.一直用動漫詞毫無感覺
4.小說題材類似,換換題材
5.格式怪怪的
以上,都是我的建議,如果內容惹到您的話請見諒^o^
7 years ago
崇宮天玥
@巧克力, 格式應該怎麼寫呢?
7 years ago
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剛剛拜讀完您的小說,發現有許多缺漏
1.小說名稱意義都差不多,無法給人新鮮感
2.有些故事內容沒有齊全,像有開頭但結局模糊
3.一直用動漫詞毫無感覺
4.小說題材類似,換換題材
5.格式怪怪的
以上,都是我的建議,如果內容惹到您的話請見諒^o^