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無喧隱痕
#679
大家好,我是無喧隱痕,來自台灣,今年14,寫小說不到1年,不是很擅長表達,但是想法很多,只是常常寫出來的與自己想要的不大相同,希望可以提供一點意見給我,謝謝^^
7 years ago
Helck Ird
@無喧隱痕, 你好
我稍微看了一下簡介,再跟在的差別自己查字典。用字不夠精簡,超級多的「我」。另外,不是一定要一個段落的最後一句話才用句號。
7 years ago
InDeeeer
沒有人一開始就懂得怎麼表達,想法很多的話,就一個一個寫下來,零碎的片段也無所謂,過了一段時間回頭再看,很多問題都豁然開朗了。
多看,多聽,多想,試著寫出一些東西,再回頭看看,慢慢的,你也會在其中逐漸明白屬於自己掌握文字的方法。也許不是最完美的,但知道能往那一個方向前進才是最大的收穫。寫作是一種習慣,而不是負擔,是一條漫長的路,希望能堅持下去,直到體會它的喜悅。
7 years ago
無喧隱痕
@InDeeeer, 謝謝妳提供的意見,我會好好參考,感謝幫助!
7 years ago
無喧隱痕
@Helck Ird, 好的,這些小細節我會更加注意,謝謝幫助!
7 years ago
書月
@無喧隱痕, 想法很多很好哦~不擅表達可以練習,但是有想法不一定能練,加油加油!
6 years ago
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我稍微看了一下簡介,再跟在的差別自己查字典。用字不夠精簡,超級多的「我」。另外,不是一定要一個段落的最後一句話才用句號。
多看,多聽,多想,試著寫出一些東西,再回頭看看,慢慢的,你也會在其中逐漸明白屬於自己掌握文字的方法。也許不是最完美的,但知道能往那一個方向前進才是最大的收穫。寫作是一種習慣,而不是負擔,是一條漫長的路,希望能堅持下去,直到體會它的喜悅。