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斟墨客 。 迷
#4
我有問題!
1.在寫神話類型的故事的時候,雖然是照著原本的神話加以改編,但有人說還是看不懂怎麼辦😂😂😂
2.轉景的部分,怎樣才不會顯得轉景太快
6 years ago
嚮往國度
是哪種意思的看不懂呀XD是指不懂神話呢~還是改編後的情節呢~等等的
轉景哦.......
也許應該是每個人觀感不同而異www
有些人寫作方式,是為了要同步「兩邊不同地點卻時同進行劇情」,但有可能會造成混亂。
有人則是一邊寫完再去寫另一邊,從描述裡還是能讓讀者明白時間是同進行的。
也許讓讀者滿足到某個可以休息的點再轉換時,才較不覺得突兀吧。
又好比某一幕已經講解了要去哪裡,場景便切換到該地這也很常見。
但如果沒給予讀者滿足一定程度的「資訊量」,我想多數人都會覺得跳太快了。
不過這也要看妳說的顯得轉太快是怎麼回事-#-
6 years ago
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1.在寫神話類型的故事的時候,雖然是照著原本的神話加以改編,但有人說還是看不懂怎麼辦😂😂😂
2.轉景的部分,怎樣才不會顯得轉景太快
轉景哦.......
也許應該是每個人觀感不同而異www
有些人寫作方式,是為了要同步「兩邊不同地點卻時同進行劇情」,但有可能會造成混亂。
有人則是一邊寫完再去寫另一邊,從描述裡還是能讓讀者明白時間是同進行的。
也許讓讀者滿足到某個可以休息的點再轉換時,才較不覺得突兀吧。
又好比某一幕已經講解了要去哪裡,場景便切換到該地這也很常見。
但如果沒給予讀者滿足一定程度的「資訊量」,我想多數人都會覺得跳太快了。
不過這也要看妳說的顯得轉太快是怎麼回事-#-