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釉瑤
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大家好~希望大家給我寶貴的意見,我因為下載Penana時要考段考,所以只有短短幾篇拉
作品名:夜下櫻(奇幻/愛情...)
這是一部(超)長篇小說,一篇接著一篇連下去,每篇都有關聯,這是我國一開始寫在本子上的小說,目前在慢慢騰上來,希望大家能提供寶貴的意見
6 years ago
阿雀
@釉瑤, 先記下來(灬ºωº灬)♡那個,你可以替我看看嗎?
6 years ago
釉瑤
@季候鳥, 好呀~週末來看好了~(話說我是新手耶...這樣真的沒問題嗎?!)
6 years ago
阿雀
@釉瑤, 沒問題沒問題,先謝謝你哦
6 years ago
阿雀
@釉瑤, 看完了看完了,感覺劇情很不錯,沒甚麼值得吐糟的地方,但是有些緊張的位置不知道是不是角色在吐糟的關係我看得很歡樂,覺得有點可惜。
6 years ago
釉瑤
@季候鳥, sorry~那裏不是緊張部分拉,而且我是想塑造出個性歡脫,但有黑暗過去的角色,因為這是超級長篇.......(我同學都嫌我寫太慢,謝謝你的點評,以後真正緊張的部分,我會特別注意的!
PS:被我爸扣住手機還不能看文
6 years ago
阿雀
@釉瑤, 原來如此,那我再等等好了
6 years ago
釉瑤
@季候鳥, 你要我看哪一部呢?(^ω^)
6 years ago
阿雀
@釉瑤, 無所謂啊,要是想一起玩就看粉紅革命
要是不想玩就看腦洞(●ↀωↀ●)✧
6 years ago
釉瑤
@季候鳥, 我覺得粉紅革命好好玩喔~(^ω^),我自己也很喜歡跟同學聊到一半開始腦洞大開,講很多奇怪的話,超喜歡選項這種設定,其實如果選項也很勁爆就更讚了( ̄∇ ̄)
6 years ago
阿雀
@釉瑤, 謝謝你,我會努力的⚈้̤͡ ˌ̫̮ ⚈้̤͡"
6 years ago
釉瑤
@季候鳥, 腦洞我只有看一篇啦(慢慢來),我好喜歡你的寫作風格哈哈~( ´▽` )ノ,話說一國王子叫貓草什麼的真的沒問題嗎?(國姓是貓),難得我覺得面具很帥的說,竟然被叫做氧氣罩(摔)
6 years ago
阿雀
@釉瑤, 呃呃呃,謝謝你(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)那、那叫魔法氧氣罩好了(有沒有覺得帥了??
6 years ago
釉瑤
@季候鳥, ……好(好冷淡?!),魔法氧氣罩!,我感受到一股淡淡的中二氣息朝我撲面而來=3=而且都會使用魔法了,竟然還要用氧氣罩!簡直是科技與魔幻的綜合體(天呀我到底在說什麼~)啊啊啊啊啊啊~原諒我就喜歡吐嘈(>﹏<),不如叫高級魔力氧氣防護罩吧!(這畫風我已不想吐嘈)
6 years ago
阿雀
@釉瑤, 那有高級是不是有低級🤔
6 years ago
釉瑤
@季候鳥, 呵呵呵~(被打!)世界本來就是不公平的,有1就有2,有好就有壞,低級防護罩……聽起來就好lol呀呀!而且防護罩這種東西原來是戴在臉上用的(我受教了⊙_⊙)
6 years ago
阿雀
@釉瑤, 不是氧氣罩嗎Σ(´゚Д゚`)(我只是問問、只是問問)
6 years ago
釉瑤
@季候鳥, 對呀!(完全忘了,說好的氧氣罩呢?!)這裡是不是要變聊天室了╮(╯▽╰)╭
6 years ago
阿雀
@釉瑤, 我們私聊吧~
6 years ago
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作品名:夜下櫻(奇幻/愛情...)
這是一部(超)長篇小說,一篇接著一篇連下去,每篇都有關聯,這是我國一開始寫在本子上的小說,目前在慢慢騰上來,希望大家能提供寶貴的意見
PS:被我爸扣住手機還不能看文
要是不想玩就看腦洞(●ↀωↀ●)✧