Hi! I would really appreciate it if you read my on-going story. It is set in a world that experience no war for a century. But everything changes just because of a few selfish people who wanted all the power for themselves.
I know it doesnt sound anything nice but read the story I swear it is my greatest yet. It just need a few correcting here and there. Constructive critism is highly appreciated. Thank you!
m.penana.com/story/12866/rein/toc
I know it doesnt sound anything nice but read the story I swear it is my greatest yet. It just need a few correcting here and there. Constructive critism is highly appreciated. Thank you!
m.penana.com/story/12866/rein/toc