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愚者
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另外,楔子不吸引怎麼辦?讀者看了楔子後,没有再看下一篇正文,大家幫忙看看楔子是不是寫得不好,還是正文不吸引
4 years ago
朱諾(Juno)
@愚者, 用演的不要用說的,世界觀塞入的蠻強硬的,如果用演的世界觀問題說不定能改善
4 years ago
愚者
@朱諾(Juno), 這個問題我也有想過,我打算先塞入世界觀再用角色互動來表達,先寫明設定
4 years ago
朱諾(Juno)
@愚者, 我覺得感覺有點像用塞的逼迫讀者吃下去,沒有那麼自然
4 years ago
愚者
@朱諾(Juno), 能不能給個例子?用我的文
謝謝啦😁
4 years ago
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謝謝啦😁