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nonameboy
#6
感謝你的建議
也就是如果只把焦點放在環境會沒那麼好
要着重襯托角色比較好的意思嗎
那如果是描寫景色的散文要如何寫
常常寫不到想寫的感覺
4 years ago
落梅時
就可讀性而言,重點的確在角色互動沒錯,太長的景色描述有時會讓很多人想skip掉,但如果這個環境不只是過場,而是重要場景,描寫得仔細一點我想是加分的
想加強描寫技法,可以搜尋“xx如何描寫",會有很多意想不到的靈感和美句,也可以平時看小說就留意,多看多寫,到時就會很順了~
4 years ago
nonameboy
@落梅時, 好喔,謝謝你!
4 years ago
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也就是如果只把焦點放在環境會沒那麼好
要着重襯托角色比較好的意思嗎
那如果是描寫景色的散文要如何寫
常常寫不到想寫的感覺
想加強描寫技法,可以搜尋“xx如何描寫",會有很多意想不到的靈感和美句,也可以平時看小說就留意,多看多寫,到時就會很順了~