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環境描寫不要佔太多,不然會有點拖沓,特殊場景的話可以聚焦在重點物品上,例如祭壇、燭光之類的,將想表達的氛圍傳達給讀者。
推動劇情,其實最最重要的就是靠角色,可以一開始先設定故事脈絡和角色個性,這樣比較不容易跑偏。
舉個例,每個角色依照個性思維所做出的行動不同,而他們最終追求的目標也會影響他們的抉擇;又角色之間也有不同的關係,像愛情、友情、結盟、敵對、亦敵亦友等,各種不同的組合都有助故事推動。
另外,也很多小說是利用突發事件,例如平穩的郊遊突遇翻車事故、看似好人的角色在最後關頭突然反水等,這些都可以多加利用。
希望有幫上你^ ^
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推動劇情,其實最最重要的就是靠角色,可以一開始先設定故事脈絡和角色個性,這樣比較不容易跑偏。
舉個例,每個角色依照個性思維所做出的行動不同,而他們最終追求的目標也會影響他們的抉擇;又角色之間也有不同的關係,像愛情、友情、結盟、敵對、亦敵亦友等,各種不同的組合都有助故事推動。
另外,也很多小說是利用突發事件,例如平穩的郊遊突遇翻車事故、看似好人的角色在最後關頭突然反水等,這些都可以多加利用。
希望有幫上你^ ^