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嵐隱
#6
我覺得看你的主軸是什麼耶!對話如果跳太大倒是可以補救回來。看你如何刪減或是修正的,我有些對話是先想先打,再來補敘述的。
之前朋友有跟我講過敘述在引號前跟後的小技巧,個人覺得不錯用。
說話在前,敘述在後,表示這個人先說話再做出什麼動作;敘述在前,說話在後,表示這個人先是動作再說話。
不過不一定都是這樣的,看個人怎麼使用。
4 years ago
無鳶
@嵐隱, 喔喔!原來如此,謝謝您的建議,我會試試看的。
4 years ago
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之前朋友有跟我講過敘述在引號前跟後的小技巧,個人覺得不錯用。
說話在前,敘述在後,表示這個人先說話再做出什麼動作;敘述在前,說話在後,表示這個人先是動作再說話。
不過不一定都是這樣的,看個人怎麼使用。