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如何寫對話?
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露娜仙仙
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為什麼對話多劇情就會跳?
4 years ago
無鳶
@露娜仙仙, 我也不清楚,我個人在寫的時候對話如果多了一點,就會跳跳跳跳跳——。
4 years ago
無鳶
@露娜仙仙, 反正就是在劇情上的轉折有點……僵,又僵又快。
4 years ago
露娜仙仙
@琉璃川冬樱, 這個可以靠練習改善的啊。
4 years ago
無鳶
@露娜仙仙,好的,我試試看。
雖然有點不知道從何練習,但我想大概抓一下感覺就可以……?
還是謝謝您的建議。
4 years ago
露娜仙仙
@琉璃川冬樱, 應該這麼說吧,描述當中的句子,換成對話會怎樣?
讓角色來說,又會變成如何?
還有,每個角色都有他獨特的個性,每句台詞說出來都會不一樣。
你要先知道,自己筆下角色的人設為何?他們會說出怎樣的話,他們說的話有無鑑別度(口頭禪之類)
例如,同樣一句話:我不想吃飯。
可能傲嬌型的:我不要吃飯啦~哼!
沈穩的:不好意思,我胃口欠佳。
幼稚型的:不要!不吃!
忍耐型的:我很飽了,再也吃不下......
每一個相同意思的句子,讓不同角色說出來都會不一樣。
4 years ago
無鳶
@露娜仙仙, 原來如此,謝謝您。
也很感謝您打了那麼多來向我解釋,我會再試試看的。
感謝您。
4 years ago
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雖然有點不知道從何練習,但我想大概抓一下感覺就可以……?
還是謝謝您的建議。
讓角色來說,又會變成如何?
還有,每個角色都有他獨特的個性,每句台詞說出來都會不一樣。
你要先知道,自己筆下角色的人設為何?他們會說出怎樣的話,他們說的話有無鑑別度(口頭禪之類)
例如,同樣一句話:我不想吃飯。
可能傲嬌型的:我不要吃飯啦~哼!
沈穩的:不好意思,我胃口欠佳。
幼稚型的:不要!不吃!
忍耐型的:我很飽了,再也吃不下......
每一個相同意思的句子,讓不同角色說出來都會不一樣。
也很感謝您打了那麼多來向我解釋,我會再試試看的。
感謝您。