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隨筆而行
#4
你說:「這個情感的轉折絕對絕對非常複雜,作者並沒有堆疊出來。」
對,始終是真人真事改編。但我已經在「夢中」的章節清楚列明了「一切是埃斯的潛意識」,代表一切都是她虛構出來,目的就是「見拉蒙一面」。
正因為她放不下那份爱,才令讀者同情
4 years ago
朱諾(Juno)
@隨筆而行, 因為扯到宗教元素,所以我一開始的主注意力就在上頭,覺得很不真實
這種喪親之痛除了悲傷外應該要有更多情緒,像麻木、無奈、驚愕、憤怒blablabla ,而女主角的情緒讓我覺得太激烈了點,不太符合人性?中間很多地方都是只是敘述……讓我感覺不太出來
嗯……作者不能強迫讀者接受他的想法,應該要想辦法用文字說服讀者
4 years ago
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對,始終是真人真事改編。但我已經在「夢中」的章節清楚列明了「一切是埃斯的潛意識」,代表一切都是她虛構出來,目的就是「見拉蒙一面」。
正因為她放不下那份爱,才令讀者同情
這種喪親之痛除了悲傷外應該要有更多情緒,像麻木、無奈、驚愕、憤怒blablabla ,而女主角的情緒讓我覺得太激烈了點,不太符合人性?中間很多地方都是只是敘述……讓我感覺不太出來
嗯……作者不能強迫讀者接受他的想法,應該要想辦法用文字說服讀者