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隨筆而行
#3
謝謝指導😢其實原本不是想傳什麼宗教信息,純粹想表達埃斯並沒有得到應有的庇佑,而遭到可悲的命運的折磨,從而引起讀者的憐憫之情。
另外,正式的結局應該是怎樣?假如我寫「埃斯因服藥過量中毒身亡」,肯定讓讀者失望,结局真的很難寫。
4 years ago
朱諾(Juno)
@隨筆而行, 這樣不會讓讀者感到憐憫,反而有種混淆視聽的感覺,讓大家聚焦在作者不了解的基督教上面
結局我不能說怎樣才是好,即便是老梗,只要作者功力足夠也能駕馭
4 years ago
隨筆而行
@朱諾(Juno), 。真的不想讓大家聚焦在我不了解的基督教上面,那麼要把那部份删除,還是你有其他基督教的理念建議我加入?
4 years ago
朱諾(Juno)
@隨筆而行, 拿掉比較好
我只能說不是教徒對很多東西不理解,沒有在那個環境生長看事情的眼光不同,所以沒有做功課前還是不要觸碰比較好
4 years ago
隨筆而行
@朱諾(Juno), ok,我會删除那部份
4 years ago
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另外,正式的結局應該是怎樣?假如我寫「埃斯因服藥過量中毒身亡」,肯定讓讀者失望,结局真的很難寫。
結局我不能說怎樣才是好,即便是老梗,只要作者功力足夠也能駕馭
我只能說不是教徒對很多東西不理解,沒有在那個環境生長看事情的眼光不同,所以沒有做功課前還是不要觸碰比較好