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簡潔還是堆疊
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橘子樂園
#5
人人口味不同吧?
我覺得該在兩方平衡,因為太簡潔反而令人代入不了(望向哥布林殺手的原著)。
華麗嗎⋯⋯要是能被理解就好,看文風吧?
這個話題不知怎麼令我想起基度山恩仇記。嗯,超好看。
5 years ago
嚮往國度
哥布林殺手真的很簡潔呢,甚至很多地方太簡潔過頭,描述力弱到讓我沒想像力,還真是多虧替他插圖的畫者。
5 years ago
朱諾(Juno)
@橘子樂園, 嗯啊 可惜課堂的要求必須達到
真的要讀者的閱讀偏好 我算純正的歐風 看日輕的人就覺得我的文字很刻意、雕琢 反之亦然
喔喔喔 有什麼關聯?
5 years ago
朱諾(Juno)
@嚮往國度, 插畫家好辛苦
5 years ago
橘子樂園
@嚮往國度, 是同好啊!但哥殺漫畫真的好看,漫畫家辛苦了。
5 years ago
橘子樂園
@朱諾(Juno), 你說的簡潔或許真的是日輕通病,看你讀者群是誰?文學少女會喜歡你的文字(比拇指)
純粹最近看的歐風文學就是基度山恩仇記啦,沒什麼。
5 years ago
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我覺得該在兩方平衡,因為太簡潔反而令人代入不了(望向哥布林殺手的原著)。
華麗嗎⋯⋯要是能被理解就好,看文風吧?
這個話題不知怎麼令我想起基度山恩仇記。嗯,超好看。
真的要讀者的閱讀偏好 我算純正的歐風 看日輕的人就覺得我的文字很刻意、雕琢 反之亦然
喔喔喔 有什麼關聯?
純粹最近看的歐風文學就是基度山恩仇記啦,沒什麼。