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艾瑞卡(Erica)
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我覺得這是個人風格的問題,你老師不喜歡這樣不代表讀者不喜歡,我覺得這種課都是很主觀的。
我的主觀意見是:背景簡約,感情那類的可多描述一點~
╭(╯3╰)╮
5 years ago
朱諾(Juno)
@王董(Erica), 嗚嗚…我知道
不過我想調查一下大家都想法 因為之前有人覺得我的文風太華麗會妨礙閱讀、分散焦點
背景簡約是指世界觀嗎?
5 years ago
艾瑞卡(Erica)
@朱諾(Juno), 我也不知道算不算世界觀
( ̄▽ ̄)
我說的背景比較像是畫面,作家會把整個世界的畫面描寫出來,像似天空的顏色、城市的顏色、氣氛什麼的,這種東西我覺得不要寫的太複雜太華麗,因為有點無聊。
我上次看一本書,那個作者用了一面紙在描寫他故事裡的城市風景,我連看都懶的看⋯⋯( ̄▽ ̄)
5 years ago
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我的主觀意見是:背景簡約,感情那類的可多描述一點~
╭(╯3╰)╮
不過我想調查一下大家都想法 因為之前有人覺得我的文風太華麗會妨礙閱讀、分散焦點
背景簡約是指世界觀嗎?
( ̄▽ ̄)
我說的背景比較像是畫面,作家會把整個世界的畫面描寫出來,像似天空的顏色、城市的顏色、氣氛什麼的,這種東西我覺得不要寫的太複雜太華麗,因為有點無聊。
我上次看一本書,那個作者用了一面紙在描寫他故事裡的城市風景,我連看都懶的看⋯⋯( ̄▽ ̄)