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新手第一次寫小說求大大指導~
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崇宮天玥
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本人第一次嘗試寫小說希望各位可以教教我~
6 years ago
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雖然我也算新手,但天玥寫小說想寫哪個方面的,建議先從這塊思考並擴張,會比較好
6 years ago
@崇宮天玥,
人物表达要仔细,可以形容五官,再到外表,最后是性格和情绪。之后,你可以加点背景故事,强项和弱点来强化你的角色浓度,让读者对你的主角抱有兴趣。
有时候,一些读者会觉得 " 为什么这个角色那么像我啊 ?" 就证明你成功了 !
人物细节可以伴随故事内容的小动作来表达出来。不需要在两三段内拼命叙述,会纳闷整个情节。
多练习,你很快就会摸索到更好的效果。
加油 !
6 years ago
琴妃_Delia
@崇宮天玥, 要一直改原稿ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ
6 years ago
K
@崇宮天玥, 最重要是人事時地物呵呵!現把這幾樣定位,再開始比較好喔!
6 years ago
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人物表达要仔细,可以形容五官,再到外表,最后是性格和情绪。之后,你可以加点背景故事,强项和弱点来强化你的角色浓度,让读者对你的主角抱有兴趣。
有时候,一些读者会觉得 " 为什么这个角色那么像我啊 ?" 就证明你成功了 !
人物细节可以伴随故事内容的小动作来表达出来。不需要在两三段内拼命叙述,会纳闷整个情节。
多练习,你很快就会摸索到更好的效果。
加油 !