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戰鬥的氣氛、情緒
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庫庫爾
#7
我想關於戰鬥的氣氛和情緒應該要看人物的個性,畢竟每個人物的戰鬥風格也會影響到當下的氣氛也應該會不一樣(譬如膽小的人打戰可能會較畏縮甚至會逃戰;較嗜血的可以手法較狂暴而且有滿滿的番茄醬可以寫進去。等等........),建議可以將戰鬥場面結合動作和人物當下的情緒來述寫,旁觀者的情緒也可以加入,只是小小的建議(笑
7 years ago
十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
這個是我最直接想到的處理「情緒」的方式。
但應該也不是一朝一夕能練成呢~
希望在之後的戰鬥場面能讓讀者感受得到。
7 years ago
庫庫爾
@十三郎寫作團隊, 其實除了當下人物的情緒以外,在戰鬥中加入幾句人物的自白(心裡話)效果也是不錯的呢~加油~
7 years ago
十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
@Chen,
OK~!!!!!!謝謝大家互相提點!
7 years ago
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但應該也不是一朝一夕能練成呢~
希望在之後的戰鬥場面能讓讀者感受得到。
OK~!!!!!!謝謝大家互相提點!