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戰鬥的氣氛、情緒
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
#1
早前收到別人對自己作品的評語。
有些點子單看是明白,但要做到這個效果有點困難。
應該如何從文字中顯示出戰鬥的鋪陳及情緒?
7 years ago
朱諾(Juno)
@十三郎寫作團隊,
多讀,多寫吧!
不斷練習一定會有所進步。
還有In writing you must kill all your darling!
希望對這樣有幫助?
7 years ago
十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
@朱諾(Juno),
對啊!所以只好每次找不同的人來為自己仔細來檢視。
最近我也重新修訂第二章的故事,我先明白大家應該看得很頭暈了~哈哈哈
7 years ago
K
@多媒體廢作人, 我覺得動作要明確,看看武俠小說的武打過程,說不定能幫助你~~
6 years ago
十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
@陳琪華,
我也是有參考不同的作品,亦在作品中不斷嘗試,希望大家看得懂便好了!
6 years ago
K
@多媒體廢作人, 也是喔喔~不過也要有自己的風格啦~
6 years ago
十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
@陳琪華,
哈哈⋯⋯我也想,其實不算是很有能力的寫作人,我還是想開放一點做不同嘗試,雖然或多或少也知道自己的方向,但在不同的類型中,確實可以取捨於自己風格的作品內。
6 years ago
K
@多媒體廢作人, 是啊,多嘗試也能有幫助呵呵!
6 years ago
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有些點子單看是明白,但要做到這個效果有點困難。
應該如何從文字中顯示出戰鬥的鋪陳及情緒?
多讀,多寫吧!
不斷練習一定會有所進步。
還有In writing you must kill all your darling!
希望對這樣有幫助?
對啊!所以只好每次找不同的人來為自己仔細來檢視。
最近我也重新修訂第二章的故事,我先明白大家應該看得很頭暈了~哈哈哈
我也是有參考不同的作品,亦在作品中不斷嘗試,希望大家看得懂便好了!
哈哈⋯⋯我也想,其實不算是很有能力的寫作人,我還是想開放一點做不同嘗試,雖然或多或少也知道自己的方向,但在不同的類型中,確實可以取捨於自己風格的作品內。