/society.php?id=223&action=replysocpost&i=2563&c=25799&o=1473&parent_id=25799
寫作交流討論 | Penana
arrow_back
寫作交流討論
Login
Cancel
Search stories, writers or societies
Show More Tags
Continue Reading
Clear All
More
What Others Are Reading
Refresh
See more results for "
"
X
Never miss what's happening on Penana!
Turn on notifications
Later
Info
Discussion
Members
文章太長怎麼辦?
Join the society to participate in the discussion!
諾貓
#1
大家好,我是骷髏貓,前不久剛加入Penana的新人,我有個困擾,便是我的小說《零界》的每一章節都有些太長了,一篇至少都要25分鐘才能看完,之前是因為我每一章節都有所謂的前言,所以很難把故事拆開,要拆也不曉得從哪裡下手,所以最多都只能分成上下章。
(考慮該怎麼拆是害怕章節太長,讀者看的很累。)
該怎麼辦?硬拆嗎?
http://www.penana.com/user/2880/%E9%AA%B7%E9%AB%8F%E8%B2%93
8 years ago
倪語
@骷髏貓, 你好!我是可莉姆,不論是在寫作還是在Penana都是完全的新手(大概來了一個月)
剛看了你的作品,發現真的是有點長呢!
建議可以從一件事與另一件事之間分段,至於如何修飾呢?就必須仰賴你的寫作能力囉!
(以上純屬參考,小可現讀國一,歡迎交朋友!)
8 years ago
葉嘉勞
@骷髏貓, 六年加每章25分鐘,小弟是來膜拜的。我都5年了,都係一篇小說寫到尾,不過無你咁強,砍掉重煉。只是諗到邊寫到邊。懶得重寫。所以對你非常敬佩
8 years ago
諾貓
@平凡的葉嘉勞, 謝謝誇獎,那你覺得會不會看得很累,要重排嗎?
8 years ago
諾貓
@可莉姆, 謝謝建議,我再想想怎麼辦,本人目前高三,歡迎當朋友
8 years ago
< Back
×
Subscribe
Go to the magazine
/
+ Add tip
The tip will be charged every payment period
+ Add promotion code
Apply
close
Recipient Name
Shipping address
Phone Number
I prefer
not to receive
the physical benefits.
JOIN
Pay with
xxxx xxxx xxxx
Update payment method
This is a one-time purchase.
If you don't cancel before the trial ends, you will automatically be charged the subscription fee every
until you cancel.
Renews automatically every
, unless you decide to cancel. You can cancel your subscription at any time.
You can pay with non-card methods if you subscribe for
12 months
.
Please leave your contact phone number here..
We will reach you soon by Whatsapp at the tel number you provide.
SUBMIT
Please enter phone number.
Credit card payment
You have subscribed to this plan already!
Manage subscriptions
X
×
People Who Like This
x
Proceed
0
will be deducted for this action.
Your current coin balance:
0
(
Click to buy coins
)
Confirm
Cancel
arrow_back
×
×
Send
send
×
Install this webapp for easier offline reading: tap
and then Add to home screen.
X
REGISTER
LOGIN
account_circle
email
vpn_key
I have read, understand, and agree to the Penana
Terms of Service
.
JOIN
email
vpn_key
Remember Me
LOGIN
Forgot Password?
OR
Login with Facebook
(考慮該怎麼拆是害怕章節太長,讀者看的很累。)
該怎麼辦?硬拆嗎?
http://www.penana.com/user/2880/%E9%AA%B7%E9%AB%8F%E8%B2%93
剛看了你的作品,發現真的是有點長呢!
建議可以從一件事與另一件事之間分段,至於如何修飾呢?就必須仰賴你的寫作能力囉!
(以上純屬參考,小可現讀國一,歡迎交朋友!)