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新作品或新手會不會擔心太多字,會勸退讀者?
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ilwiKAMINA
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我覺得重點不在字數,而是有沒有講重點跟敘事邏輯。
如果對方聽不懂你的重點,一百字都嫌多。
如果對方認為你表達清晰且敘事精彩,一千字都嫌少。
1 year ago
Sonia
其實我講的「字數勸退」主要也是針對「一開始」,
有些好故事需要鋪陳,還有一些比較特別的寫作方式,確實需要耐心,所以不是只有「對方認為你表達清晰且敘事精彩」才是重點,讀者的耐心及回饋也是很重要的。當然滄海遺珠在所難免,所以才會有這個討論群。謝謝你的意見~
1 year ago
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如果對方聽不懂你的重點,一百字都嫌多。
如果對方認為你表達清晰且敘事精彩,一千字都嫌少。