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寫作程度很像小學生
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如果寫實體文 文筆很重要 但是網文 文筆流暢就可以了
你先交代一下 你看過什麼書 你覺得哪一本是好小說 才可以對症下藥 否則只是空談
2 years ago
石苫籽
我印象最深刻是看過宮部美幸的模仿犯以及阿嘉莎‧克莉絲蒂的書,但是裡面的寫作技巧我卻一個都沒有用進自己的寫作
2 years ago
Y2
@石苫籽, 寫作技巧是很虛的東西 要用到的時候 你自然就會用上 不會特別去考慮寫作技巧
我想他們說你寫得像小學生 大概是因爲 用字不夠精準 對白語感奇怪 而且 文中有很多東西都是不需要的 簡而言之 文筆累贅
2 years ago
Y2
@石苫籽, 看你的書單 你應該是走懸疑 驚慄 推理的路線 但其實這種小說對新人不友好 因為當中用到的技巧很難學 譬如說設置懸念
現階段 你先按照我建議做做吧 先練好文筆 再想技巧
2 years ago
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你先交代一下 你看過什麼書 你覺得哪一本是好小說 才可以對症下藥 否則只是空談
我想他們說你寫得像小學生 大概是因爲 用字不夠精準 對白語感奇怪 而且 文中有很多東西都是不需要的 簡而言之 文筆累贅
現階段 你先按照我建議做做吧 先練好文筆 再想技巧