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極簡·女皇
#4
個人覺得妳的小說寫得蠻好的,並無交待不清楚的問題。不過,有一些地方有贅詞,建議妳整個自行檢視一遍,稍作調整,還有,請注意邏輯詞(連接詞)的使用,連接詞在創作表現上非常重要。
2 years ago
石苫籽
好喔謝謝,我再思考要怎麼校稿。
2 years ago
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