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有沒有出現過一直覺得自己寫的渣,不敢上載的情況?
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遺兔
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同意樓上所述,世界觀的設定堆在了一起,有點難消化,特別是蝴蝶講XIII那裡,在讀者還沒熟悉你寫的世界觀之前,最好慢慢把設定滲透在故事裡面。
如果用第一人稱寫到不順手,改用第三人稱也是可以的,雖然這樣的內心活動不及第一人稱深入,但可以用從多個角色的角度去講故事。
觀感真的是第一標準,特別是對手機用戶來講,太多字聚在同一段會讓人閱讀疲勞。
個人並非異世界題材的專家,也不好給太多內容上的意見,在此推薦兩個覺得受用的寫作專欄,共勉之。
https://www.penana.com/story/39540/讀寫象外-寫作教學專欄
https://www.penana.com/story/67205/寫作心得分享
3 years ago
諸葛村夫
@遺兔, 我當時寫的方向其實Xlll這段神話不是世界觀的一部分,而比較像是一個伏筆。我想這幾天我會嘗試改一改分段,還有把Ed的過去分開幾章寫。也考慮一下會不會改人稱。
3 years ago
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如果用第一人稱寫到不順手,改用第三人稱也是可以的,雖然這樣的內心活動不及第一人稱深入,但可以用從多個角色的角度去講故事。
觀感真的是第一標準,特別是對手機用戶來講,太多字聚在同一段會讓人閱讀疲勞。
個人並非異世界題材的專家,也不好給太多內容上的意見,在此推薦兩個覺得受用的寫作專欄,共勉之。
https://www.penana.com/story/39540/讀寫象外-寫作教學專欄
https://www.penana.com/story/67205/寫作心得分享