I would love for you all to check out my newest work, so far with one excerpt of my main novel project. I'm not currently at the stage for hardcore editing feedback with this project, but I would be very interested about what impressions you got for the story overall in this excerpt, what interests you about the concept, and what you liked and/or didn't like in this excerpt. :)
https://www.penana.com/story/68397/sin-game/issue/0
https://www.penana.com/story/68397/sin-game/issue/0