Hello to you Amelia what is your idea about, I would be happy to give you some constructive criticism and honest thoughts. Perhaps we could help each other out if you like Zootopia I am writing a fan fiction story so we can share ideas if you like.
@Firemaster1, hey, thanks for your help. I will be a bit busy this week so I won't be able to help you, but next week we can talk about our stories and help each other : )
Thank you