I'm searching for constructive feedback for my story.

 I'll put the summary of *The Frost Dragon's Disciple* below, and if anyone is interested I'll post the link as well. Currently, there are only three chapters posted, but I have written 14, and will post the rest after seeing how these first three goes. Thanks!

Summary:

Adventurers. The legendary individuals who transcend their own limits by searching for the ancient treasures forgotten by even time itself, exploring every quarter and cent of the vast, fantastic world of Atlas!

Do you enjoy the thrill of dangerous quests while fighting fearsome monsters? Or maybe you just love when adrenaline pumps through your veins as you read about epic battles? 

If that's true, you came to the right place!

Link to the story: 

penana.com/story/11152/the-frost-dragon-s-disciple/toc