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老闆娘
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目前我正在寫異能者的世界,需要各位朋友們的建議~~
6 years ago
嚮往國度
@老闆娘,
看了1~11
建議1
先深入了解你創造的這些角色,看你要賦予這些角色什麼工作,當然包括主角。
建議2
故事題材有了
就是看不到主旨,這是最大硬傷。
什麼是主旨?等我回去用電腦再說明
建議3
架空的故事背景空白了些。
背景指的不只是角色處的環境
包括其它人物的社經地位環境
以及人文環境風俗等
缺少這些,因此故事也看起來白了一點。
6 years ago
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看了1~11
建議1
先深入了解你創造的這些角色,看你要賦予這些角色什麼工作,當然包括主角。
建議2
故事題材有了
就是看不到主旨,這是最大硬傷。
什麼是主旨?等我回去用電腦再說明
建議3
架空的故事背景空白了些。
背景指的不只是角色處的環境
包括其它人物的社經地位環境
以及人文環境風俗等
缺少這些,因此故事也看起來白了一點。