Well I guess I'm gonna start,

I have this old YA story that I wrote entirely on mobile with an app called Werdsmith. It's pretty, you might want to check that out. I use it whenever I'm waiting for someone at a coffeeshop and unfortunately having no internet so I just write on my iPod instead. Anyway, before I drift far away from the point, here's my YA story, one of my simpler stories I've ever conceptualized. (for some of you might know my concepts as being different)

Cheese & Onions
http://www.penana.com/story/3554/cheese-onions/toc

It's a story about Jeremy, a 19 year old guy who impulsively kidnapped his 5 year old half-brother as a revenge on his father who left him to start a new family. When he realized his mistake, it was too late to turn back as he has already taken his hostage-brother to the farthest side of the country on the coast. There he meets a family that takes them in and their lives begin to become entangled with the joyful family. A kind of family Jeremy never had.

So yeah, that's it. Currently sits at 83 views with no reviews. There's only 2 chapters so far. I haven't gone back to it since Sept. 15. Hope you guys read it and tell me what you think.