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大家可以幫我看看這篇文章如何嗎?
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別在那邊裝可憐搞的自己像被欺負的悲劇角色
你仔仔細細看我們這些人打的字好嗎-...-"
不用你說也知道你是人,肉做的,希望你的心也是肉做的。
我們可沒有人對你惡言相向。相信我,這些不是惡言好嗎-3-"
沒人責罵、沒人對你毒語、沒人飆國罵,甚至沒有批評呢,玼瑕的確很直白,或許有些直白讓人不舒服,但說真的,他的直白算很客氣了,而且這份客氣還是很成熟的。
而我也說了,「這個故事在讀者們對你的文筆產生想法之前,標點符號的問題,更讓他們感到困擾不是嗎?」 否則大家先留言怎麼會都是針對標點符號呢。
你最後的回答則是等知音,那讀者的感受你真的在乎嗎-..-??
5 years ago
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你仔仔細細看我們這些人打的字好嗎-...-"
不用你說也知道你是人,肉做的,希望你的心也是肉做的。
我們可沒有人對你惡言相向。相信我,這些不是惡言好嗎-3-"
沒人責罵、沒人對你毒語、沒人飆國罵,甚至沒有批評呢,玼瑕的確很直白,或許有些直白讓人不舒服,但說真的,他的直白算很客氣了,而且這份客氣還是很成熟的。
而我也說了,「這個故事在讀者們對你的文筆產生想法之前,標點符號的問題,更讓他們感到困擾不是嗎?」 否則大家先留言怎麼會都是針對標點符號呢。
你最後的回答則是等知音,那讀者的感受你真的在乎嗎-..-??