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安安,我是新手書書,現在正寫《那曾經,錯過了什麼》
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書月
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我有個問題......詩作是重詞彙還是情感?我一直被人直戳感情表達不佳,重於詞彙。
但這就是我的詩風呀!希望能藉由小說練情感!務必多多給建議哦!
7 years ago
朱諾(Juno)
@書月, Hmm我是覺得兩種都不錯
當然,能夠兼具是更好啦!
就我個人而言,我是詞藻派的。因為年齡問題,寫不出有內涵的東西,只好先練文筆啦!←不過我文筆也不怎麼好就是了
Btw你的小說超好看~
7 years ago
書月
@朱諾(Juno), 詞藻派握手!你說到重點了!我覺得我也是人生歷練不夠以至於內容內涵不夠!或許該計畫些旅行拓展視野
7 years ago
星歿
@書月, 我覺得情感比較重要。其實寫得好的小說只要簡單的文詞,不需要什麼華麗的詞藻就能表現出豐厚的情感。不是說文筆好壞,我認為能否真正展現出那些內涵才是重點!
雖然咱是詞藻派的啦( ;ω;)四個月前的形容詞過盛到想賞自己幾個耳光......(多到文義不暢做什麼qq##
7 years ago
書月
@星歿, 謝謝你的建議>v<
我的詩作駢儷,但小說應該比較有感情啦!
我也會多加磨練的!
7 years ago
星歿
@書月,詩詞嗎?!!!那很厲害欸XDDD我這方面完全不行😂
7 years ago
書月
@星歿, 我的散文就不太行啦Q^Q沒感情......
→寫景派、駢儷詩
7 years ago
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但這就是我的詩風呀!希望能藉由小說練情感!務必多多給建議哦!
當然,能夠兼具是更好啦!
就我個人而言,我是詞藻派的。因為年齡問題,寫不出有內涵的東西,只好先練文筆啦!←不過我文筆也不怎麼好就是了
Btw你的小說超好看~
雖然咱是詞藻派的啦( ;ω;)四個月前的形容詞過盛到想賞自己幾個耳光......(多到文義不暢做什麼qq##
我的詩作駢儷,但小說應該比較有感情啦!
我也會多加磨練的!
→寫景派、駢儷詩