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【寫評】《魔王傳》──待那深淵之暗影綻放
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感謝花時間寫書評!
大部分關於書評的討論都在私信那邊聊過了,這邊就不再提及。
關於青鳥的故事,故事中其實是尤莉迪絲突然想到的,只停留在內心自己的思考,沒有實際講出來,也不是卡倫說的,這部分應該是你記錯。當然你說的情緒表達等等建議,我會好好思考日後修改要怎麼完善這部分。
很多建議對我都很有幫助,雖然無法立即做出妥善的修正,但我會好好消化這些建議。
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大部分關於書評的討論都在私信那邊聊過了,這邊就不再提及。
關於青鳥的故事,故事中其實是尤莉迪絲突然想到的,只停留在內心自己的思考,沒有實際講出來,也不是卡倫說的,這部分應該是你記錯。當然你說的情緒表達等等建議,我會好好思考日後修改要怎麼完善這部分。
很多建議對我都很有幫助,雖然無法立即做出妥善的修正,但我會好好消化這些建議。