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卡爾爺爺與茶先生
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https://www.penana.com/story/90783/%E7%8C%B6%E5%A4%A7%E8%A8%88%E7%95%AB/
我的小說是<<猶大計畫>>
內容是講述一個冷戰時期的星球,在核戰的邊緣上。而第二男主角寇迪(男主角目前還沒出場表現)是一個帝國的軍官/貴族。他和叔叔克爾參與一項叫做猶大計畫的行動,也得知了目前國際局勢如此動盪的內幕。而猶大計畫可以讓皇帝(寇迪堂弟)在戰後活著。
之所以採用第二男主的寫法是,我原本的草稿是先用克爾的視角,但是這會立刻知道猶大計畫。而第一男主則是半個上帝視角,所以第一男主還不能先出場爆雷。
我認為我人物之間的對話還需要加強(本人稍微社恐),但寫故事和軍事設定我覺得還好。也歡迎大家的指教謝謝。
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我的小說是<<猶大計畫>>
內容是講述一個冷戰時期的星球,在核戰的邊緣上。而第二男主角寇迪(男主角目前還沒出場表現)是一個帝國的軍官/貴族。他和叔叔克爾參與一項叫做猶大計畫的行動,也得知了目前國際局勢如此動盪的內幕。而猶大計畫可以讓皇帝(寇迪堂弟)在戰後活著。
之所以採用第二男主的寫法是,我原本的草稿是先用克爾的視角,但是這會立刻知道猶大計畫。而第一男主則是半個上帝視角,所以第一男主還不能先出場爆雷。
我認為我人物之間的對話還需要加強(本人稍微社恐),但寫故事和軍事設定我覺得還好。也歡迎大家的指教謝謝。